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for Kiss of Fire

by Spleef

person Me...who else
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I'm so glad you updated!!! I loved the Sukka bit just before the end. The world needs more Sukka!!! And the fact that Katara is now aware of who she is and is happy makes me happy. I can't wait to see how this ends!
person Tatiana
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I could not get away from my computer at all durring this story. I cannot wait for the rest to be completed, from sneaking on this site at work to simply reading this for endless hours. You are an great writer and it was a great pleasure to read this story! Zutara forever <3
person Jaz021
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! can't wait for the rest!!!!
person Kitty
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated so quickly :D. This chapter was very fascinating. I love how, in the beginning of the story, Zuko was the one with knowledge about them, and now it's Katara. I enjoyed the twist that she had, in fact, been with Aang in previous lives. But still, Zuko was always her soulmate. And the part about Agni and the water tribe girl was enjoyable, too. I always wondered if you might do that, since it seems that Zuko's character sort of mirrors Agni, sometimes. I'm also glad to see that Zuko is being understanding about Katara having children. I know he doesn't want to lose her again, but women risk it for a reason lol. But he's a guy, and he made a typical guy remark. You did a good job wriing his remorse and sorrow for Katara very well. It grieved him, but it wasn't something you couldn't picture Zuko thinking/feeling. And I'm also pleased to see typical Zuko getting shut up by his wife by ordering her to leave with him and then she just says, "No." Lol, I lost it. I love Zuko, but he can be such a stubborn, domineering jerk sometimes, and it's probably a good thing that Katara has the backbone to stand up to him. It was such a good chapter. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story! :D
person jess9450
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMIGASS you updated!! yay!!
great chapter - like the rest of them :) Finally they are reunited...I wonder what's gonna happen? Please don't wait too long to give us the next chapter! Pretty Please!
person Renai007
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait to see the next chapter. Oh please update soon, I love long chapters, you do it so well.
person Me...who else
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!!! WHERE'S THE REST!!!!!
person Wings2Fly
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As I read your stories, I find myself more and more amazed with each chapter. You draw your readers in and leave them wanting more. I love how you slowly build up the plot, and twist it cleverly all the way. You have a masterful way with words that many published authors could only hope to possess. Keep writing, knowing that people like myself truly appreciate and enjoy reading your hard work!

With much love, Raven
person jaz021
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wait long enough for this chapter and it was worth it!!!

love it!!!

don't take long this time to finish this is so dam good!!!

hope to read it soon!!!!
person Qistina
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i've becomed adddicted to this story! pleaseee write more! i love it. i'm shaking with anticipation to see what would katara do once she sees zuko at kyoshi island!