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for Kiss of Fire

by Spleef

person Shania
schedule June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and i thought you described it well and had enough details. It is a unique story idea that i have never seen before making this story all the more enjoyable. I think that you, if you wanted to, could become an amazing author and make profit from stories. You would have to tell me when you publish one though so i could go buy it.
Anyway, i think this was amazing and i am glad i had the chance to read it.
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Truly one of the most amazing stories I have ever read let alone a great fanfiction. I appreciate your amazing work and will look into reading some of your novels.

PS: Your on my alert at fanfiction.net lol
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't believe you took the end all the way to their deaths; I liked that for a change. As opposed to how stories usually end with a young couple who have their whole lives in front of them. This version has many lives set out for them to live and love again. I liked the change of heart Ozai underwent. But as death crept nearer for our couple I really thought the idea of living without each other would invoke a love suicides kind of thing. But I guess the two of them are the kind of characters who are too strong to just choose to stop living. Zuko's death reminded me of Vito Corleone collapsing in the garden playing with his grandson in The Godfather. The legacy you established throughout the lands and bloodlines was amazing. It was a very convincing family tree (and through all of the elements too) - although I would have liked to know which of Kuzon's sons was decided to be the heir apparent.

You know I can remember a fine summer's morning years ago when I got up to read this story and then go outside with my music and envision myself in the plot somehow. That was back when Katara was still only Muimui and only just met Zuko at the Summit. I've truly enjoyed following this story through the many years you've written it and its ending is very wonderful. Congratulations on the completion of such a masterful story. Your writing is what introduced us and I look forward to your future endeavors and our continued friendship.
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful ending! I teared up a little. But it was truly a great way to end their love story.
person Kathy Quinn
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just Wow.

It was wonderful...
person Jazz
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait...

All I can say is I love it and enjoyed it so much I have to re-read it again!!!

Happy holidays and happy new year to you too!!!!
person FaerieInCombatBoots
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really enjoyed seeing all of Zuko and Katara's past lives. It reminds me a little bit of a comic called Gloomcookie, where the main character and her boyfriend have been together in all their past lives, but due to a curse, she keeps dying, only to repeat the vicious cycle via reincarnation.
Anyway, I'm really loving this story.
person FaerieInCombatBoots
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the end of this chapter made me cry!
person FaerieInCombatBoots
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Spleef, I did read and enjoy the little informational bit. And I enjoyed Katara/Miumi being so epic. And now, I will share a fact with you: When you mentioned most cultures considering menstruation unclean I was reminded of this, in Native American cultures, women who had their periods were segregated from the rest of society not because they were considered filthy, but because it was believed that their period made their medicine much more powerful than the men's and that their powerful medicine could affect sacred ceremonies, such as sweat lodges. This practice carries on even today.
Just wanted to share that. I love the story.
person FaerieInCombatBoots
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when or if any of the old gang would show up, and I was especially wondering about Toph and her daughter. *wink wink*