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Ooh, you've changed it a little bit from the original! I love how deep down inside, Zuko is still an awkward turtleduck at heart.

A "man of honor" doesn't do the things he does.

love your stories, really I do, but holy hell does Zuko come off as an ass at times lol I get that he is lonely and desperately misses katara but Jesus dude should have a little more tact when dealing with her reincarnation and is putting his feelings above her's and bullying her just to get a reaction. Kamas comes off as "my master, right or wrong" yes-man who I thought would feel more sympathy for a girl who is being strong armed into something like this given how his mother was probably taken from her home. Another thing about Zuko is at times he comes off as a 'bastard boyfriend', overly magnificent bastard,marty stu/jerk sue who's nation is the baddest thing since the atom bomb that has not suffered any reprecussions from a 100 year war THEY started and he can apparently throw some massive weight around in nations where he is not the authority. You are a master of bringing out the sensual chemistry between those two but at times it just feels like dubious consent where zuko just persists until he gets his way. I am honestly not trying to knock ya, I have read all of your stories from start to finish and love them, its just Zuko's characterization at times moves him from the jerkass woobie status straight to plain old jerkass. This was just an opinion and I await more of your stories.

Thanks so very much for updating!

I'm curious as to whether or not there will be many differences between the re-posting & the original????

Thank you for adding another chapter! Can't wait for the reset! :)

Hi there! I came back to finish the story, but it looks like only the first chapter entry is up. Were you planning on re-posting the rest?

Thanks!

Fantastic story. The final installment had me weeping like a little girl ;)

I am a HUGE fan of this story!! I love the creative spins you put on the ATLA characters as well as adding your own characters! I love how you have interwoven them! So creative & tastefully done! I also LOVE the fact that you had Zuko's son be named Kuzon! I thought that was a wonderful plot twist! Thank you for writing this!! I've been up too late at night reading it all summer long! You have a wonderful gift for words! Never Stop Writing Please!!!

That is the best Avatar fanfiction I've ever read. The amount of work and time put into it shows. You did an excellent job.