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for Kiss of Fire

by Spleef

person Mariposa
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I want to see how Miumi adjusts to her new life now.
person Mariposa
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am happy that you are making a past storyline as well. Yes.
person Mariposa
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Mariposa
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The little Kuzon is very sweet.
person Melodiee
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kuzon is so sweet... but why must you withold the sex from Zuko and his love?
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I know I've said it before! This is my favorite story! Oh that poor prince! Miumi has her work cut out for her. I also enjoy the flashbacks that explain the past. This is a very involved story, one that I look forward to reading more about. Now write! Damn it! I command thee to write like the wind and have the next chapter of this story up by tomorrow. He he! Just kidding. Soon please!
person Melodiee
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I enjoy its rhythm, the POVs and use of first person narrative. I don't know why, but I just adore Kamas! It's like he is the voice of reason for Miumi. And wow! Fire Lord Zuko certainly does have some stellar restraint! (Fans self) Is it hot in here or what? I am assuming that Miumi will rediscover her past life eventually and I am looking forward to seeing her interact with the Prince. Excellent work! Please update soon! Pretty please!
person looneyluna
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has such potential. It's the first Avatar story I read and I have been hooked ever since. Keep up the great work. I won't beg for an update. I see you have other pokers in the fire of fanfiction. Nevertheless, I will be waiting for the update.
person Marie
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I very much like this...it's well researched and...wow. Please keep writing.