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I like it. Just has serious grammer issues and the story is a bit mixed up. I swear earlier u said Ioah died before Zuko could begit an heir and that Kuzon's mother had died a couple years after birthing him. Other then that good work; keep writing and it will all get better.

I noticed you request for feedback as it is your fuel for continuing. I enjoy your stories and have read most. I like this chapter because she doesn't protest her situation as much and actually finds pleasant things about it. It's not that I don't understand why she would be protesting, but it grates on my nerves when she brings up the same subject over and over. I think new problems are always more refreshing, such as liking where she is and someone instead wanting her home. I also like how you separated her personality somewhat from Katara's where she acts more "proper" and has problems adjusting to standing up for herself because of her upbringing in a more refined home rather than having a duplicate Katara. It anchors the reader and lets them know that, yes, it's a reincarnation of Katara, but it's not Katara. I enjoy the playful teasing moments between both of them because that what makes a relationship more solidified and real to me. By recreating moments that real couples have in relationships, it helps the reader relate to the story.

Thanks for all your hard work and please keep doing what you do. I look forward to the next chapter.

good chapter! I really like were the story is going.

Another great chapter. I have read every story you have writen and none have disapointed me. I really like the way you portray Zuko and the way his element influences his character. Very good. Keep up the good work

An excellent piece of writing. Your technique is lively and engaging, and often made me double check to make sure I wan't reading Wuthering Heights! Please continue to update, if only to sate the desire of one Zutara shipper to see more excellent fan-fiction.

Great like the other chapters. I hope you continue this story further. ^_^

I am really enjoying this story so far.

I stumbled across "Kiss of Fire" and read it first, then I had to go back to read "Slow Heat" "Hot Water" and "Volcano"-- then before I knew it I had read everything.

Thank you so much for your hard work, and please continue to write. I'd love to see how this all ends.

hey, luv da idea, its very original, although not exactly zutara....but similar to it! omg, when is zuko gonna tell miumi da truth?!?!?! when is da next installment? how big is dis btw?!?! keep up da great riting! and pleez get sum fanart 4 dis!

I am still loving this story! I check daily for updates. This chapter was very cute and I cannot wait for the next one! :D

Hey, Kiss of Fire is awesome! I really like it. you should keep updating it!
PS: You should let Miumi find out about her previous life and then go from there, I just can't stand her being kept in the dark like that.