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Long time reader, first time to leave a comment. Please continue the story. I enjoy it immensely. Your character development is what I like the most. Keep up the great work.

I'm still eagerly waiting for your next update! I love the changes you have made to the story, it was the best story out there and now it is even better! Please continue to update, I check every day! I read this over and over again :)

I am in love with all the updates! Please don't stop updating, this is the best story I've read on the site and I check repeatedly to see for updates. I can't wait to read the rest, please keep updating!

I think this is a great story!

Hey, glad to see you've updated again. ^_^ I bought the ebook for the first Darkness Becomes Her, I really liked it! I'm super impatient for the next two to come out, lol, but I get that you need more time to finalize and revise and add to the stories. Will any of the side stories be included in the upcoming books, something like Worthy of Love (and speaking of, will you ever go back to it? I love Hephaestus and Kabeiro!) or Rejuvenation? I'm super glad that you're getting published, and that you haven't forgotten your loyal internet readers in the meantime! I was a little afraid that you'd abandon us after getting published and such, like Cassandra Claire did. I'm curious, since I read Kiss of Fire when you were first posting it, and now you're revising it; do you prefer to revise main plot points, or to revise individual scenes or characters? The most noticeable change so far, imho, has been your changes in Miumi's servants, as well as a few of the foreshadow-ey bits about her memories of Katara. Do you enjoy these revisions, or is it cringe-worthy to see how you used to write (not criticism! I've always enjoyed your work, I just know it can feel that way.) Anyhow, great chapter as always, thanks and please update soon!

This is quite an intrasting story! Keep up the good work!

Still loving every word! As always, I'm eagerly waiting for more chapters!! Keep up the good work!

I just love the changes you've done, very subtle but lovely. Very good work!! Please keep it up!

I rather enjoy your story. I like how you try to fill in the holes. Keep up the good work.

I'm so glad you posted another chapter!! I loved it as always. Keep up the posting!