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this is so good i love it

Let the fight begin! Zuko is going to kill them! You don't mess with a man's wife and child and think you are going to get away with it!?!

I love your story and I can't wait until you update again!!

Yay! Zuko to the rescue! ...I'd hope that things could come to pass in the next chapter without an actual engagement of fighting, but considering Enki's IQ (-37) I don't think that's gonna happen. Which makes me worry for Kuzon!! The poor dear! So cold, and lonesome! And Miumi's predicament is just as awful, even if she's being fed and whatnot. Eeew. I'm glad that Enki was childish enough to reject her for being 'unclean'. And I liked in this chapter how you showed Miumi's intelligence once again, through her actions. Like how Kamas commented back in the confrontation with Enki as they were leaving Omashu, Miumi assesed the situation, and was able to find the best way to hopefully escape unscathed. Thank you so very much for updating! And we all know that there is no way Zuko will leave Enki on the throne after this. So after all the hullabaloo has died down, who can we look forward to as the next Earth King?

Poor Miumi/Katara! I hope Zuko beats the ever loving shit out of Enki!! How could anyone be so mean to a child *cries* I was half hoping for Miumi to find some random knowlege of waterbending and completely obliterate Enki. Then freeze his testicles off.. Well, again, your stories are never a dissapointment. Please update soon!

I have enjoyed reading your story so much! Your a great writer and I love your plot. I can't wait till your next chapter and wish it speed!

Who-ho here comes the calvery. I like how you have her play the part and the unclean line was good. You do a good job of keeping this story in the historical context. And as always keeping my Zuzu's hard outer shell with the creamy filling that I so love about his character. Given what delight you wrote for Katara being taken by Zuko by the pirates I really can't wait to see what you're going to do in the next few episodes.

Thank god!! finally. We can be rid of that brat enki!!! please please please make sure his death is SLOW and PAINFUL!!! i hate his guts -_-( i don't care if he's fictional... i still hate him) and I love this story.

Excellent work as usual! I'm eager to see how the next chapter plays out. This chapter made me laugh in some places, feel sad in others. Great chapter!

Damn, Enki deserves a kick where it hurts most -_-; Get 'im, Zuko! *dramatic shaking of the fist*

This is a great story! I wish you'd update more often, but I see you have other projects going on, so it's all good ^_^

Slow and painful torture would just not be enough for our friend Enki...I am not quite sure what I would do to him but it would invole knives and sensitive areas of the body(hint).

It is so great to know there are still authors who write story with plot, and reasons for the actions of the characters. I myself am not a writer and if I did I am sure that aff would imploy a NEGATIVE ratings system just for me. But enough about that, you keep writing because this is worth the reading as well as are all your other works.