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you are the few writers that make me cry, make my skin crawl and feel like i am apart of the story. i red all you stories on ffn and affn. so bravo because only a few writers write so brilliantly to make me feel the emotions that the characters are experiencing.

Yay!!! Katara/Miumi and Kuzon are safe and cuddling with Zuko! This chapter was marvolously contenting. Katara whipping Enki's butt was most satisfying. So happy to see you update this story! (it's definitly one of my favorites!)

heyyyyyyyy i've been waiting and waiting for soooo longgggggggg for the next chapter to this beautiful story but i think i've given up

great story! you are so adept at story-telling. I'm dying to read the rest, you've got me hanging on the edge of my seat. Poor little Kozun.

This story is awesome!!!! I snuck away and read few chapters at work even though I would be in serious trouble if I got caught. Thats how much I had to know what happened next. Now I am at the end... please put me out of my misery. Update soon. Please.

When I reached Chapter 27 and realized this was the end, I actually screamed. I screamed out loud. This story captivated me, trapped me, and forced me to hit the next button every single time. It demands to be read, compels. You love the characters, and hate others. Oh, I hate one in particular with a vengeance. I cannot bear the thought of this not being continued. My praise knows no bounds, my exultation as I read each new chapter no limits. I don't think I could stand it if the story stopped here.

Wow....I mean wow, This story has me completely enthralled. At first I was a little turned off at first because of Zuko's very, demanding I guess is the best word; attitude. But for some reason I stuck with it, and just couldn't look away. The way the story has played out so far is hypnotic for lack of a better word (that isn't enthralling again) I'm proud to admit you've got another follower of this story! I'm very curious as to what will happen next. (though at some point I predict Enki getting his ass handed to him!!) I particularly like your writing style for this story. It's an interesting way to do a First person, from three people's point of view (or maybe more?) I also like how when you do change perspectives, you don't repeat yourself, which I'm still catching myself expecting at times.

Anway the long and the short of it is, I really like this story! and I would love to continue reading it as long as you are willing to continue it!!

hello i am one of the many readers that doesn't review. i have been capitvated by your story and now i am forced to live on this cliff hanger. shame on you shame. so if i review i get more story. huh huh please. pretty please? But all in all i truely love this story poor little kuzon. Zuko is so pissed! even im a little scared of what he might do. although i think it would be awsome if miumi herself were able to rescue herself and her son on her own by doing some wicked bending. someone will just have to be dumb enough to give her acsess to enough water.

omgosh this story is by far the best story i've ever read .... its got everything there is to read .. keep up the good job .... i believe u are on ur way to becoming a great author .... dont ever let anyone tell u otherwise

I enjoy reading your story. However, the characters appear too...sedate? Conflicts resolve too easily and it doesn't sit well for me.