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Here’s part 2 of my review of da latest chapter in da epic fic known only as Kiss of Fire.

First thing I want to comment on is character interaction. Its nice to see Kuzon interact with someone else besides his mother than Miumi/Katara, I know the boy is young & everything a needs a lot of parental guidance, but please don’t do it at the expense of making Kuzon a momma’s boy. I mean there nothing is wrong with being a momma’s boy its just I don’t want to see da boy become too dependent on Miumi/Katara.

Next interaction I would like to comment on is Miumi/Katara’s interaction with Toph. I enjoy seeing tension that the two have for one another. Its shows that death cannot sever the ties of relationship no matter what, however Toph needs to slow her role as well as Miumi/Katara before these two instigate a political war between their houses & nations. I suppose Miumi/Katara could learn to be a little more patient & deal with Toph’s blunt & direct attitude seeing how she is the Fire Lord’s wife & everything & Toph could be a little more sensitive to this new incarnation of Katara. I just pray Zuko doesn’t get between those 2.

It was very nice to see a family reunion between parents & daughter. It’s a shame that they couldn’t express their true feelings for one another under the peering eyes of fire nation personal. The only thing I would’ve like to see in this section of the chapter was more interaction between An Mei & Miumi/Katara, the whole time it was just Miumi/Katara and her pa talking.

I was very surprised to Suki & the Kyoshi Warriors make an appearance. And the meeting between Miumi/Katara & Suki was very interesting especially how Suki kinda help to trigger some sleeping memories within Miumi/Katara. And thank you for allowing Kuzon to spar with da Kyoshi Warriors dem, it kinda subtracts his shy behaviour & gives him the opportunity to come out of his shell & learn to interact with other people than besides his parents. And I’m glad that Miumi/Katara & Suki didn’t get mad or all tight ass when Kuzon called Miumi/Katara “mama”. Hopefully one day the boy will be able to call her dat in public maybe or when he gets older or something he can call Miumi/Katara “mother”. That term allows him to still show affection & love to his mama but yet maintain respect for her public status.

Kuzon + Miumi/Katara little goodnight scene was alright and cute it has everything I have come to expect for their relationship. Quick question though Spleef dat boy still havin’ nightmares?

And finally the Lord & his wife snuggled up together saying dey love one another & good night. Ya know if Miumi/Katara’s memories every do come back Zuko won’t have have anybody but himself to blame, well for one dat thing he said to her before he fell asleep and also keep her past life a secret from her, I mean sure they kinda resolve da issue when dey was on da ship back to the Fire nation capital but still, dis is Zuko’s wife, Bossy when she gets the chance, persistent, determined, passionate Katara. Zuko should know that she will press the matter time & time again. I wonder what will become of Zuko’s & Miumi/Katara relationship when & if her memories awaken. Will Katara be in the driver’s seat of Miumi body, will Miumi remember her past life & try to return to the after life where her spirit should be, or will she remember & resent Zuko for hiding these facts for the rest of their days?

Spleef I can’t wait to see what you have in store for your next chapter man ROCK ON MAN!

Yo Spleef I must commend you man this was quite the chapter.

First thing I want to discuss is Enki's punishment. Now I thought long and hard about dis & let me tell you it wasn't easy.

Let's look at the scenarios, if Enki is executed it may make Zuko look like a feudal lord in this new era of peace that he played a pivotal role to create. There entails the theme of hypocrisy. Which is bad for Zuko because he's a good guy now, with a wife & kid, & while his nation wouldn't dare question his judgement, you still have to take into account the other nations.

Giving Omashu back to Zuko may make amends, but dats only in the monetary sense. There is still the X Factor of Enki.

So that kinda only leaves one option left Enki should be stripped of his crown and exiled on a island, but not just an ordinary a fire nation island. Enki should be exiled on a fire nation island and left there to die! What better punishment can there be then to exile one in a nation he despises, plus its a good security measure to make sure he doesn't do dis shit again. Perhaps he can be accomodated on a similar island like the boiling rock. Only thing is na, is we gotta take away his bending abilities otherwise he'll just bend a tunnel or walkpath of the island & take revenge, and that would just SUCK!

So dats da plan leave him on a island to die, I feel that this is the best way for Zuko to get his revenge preserve his image as a fair & just Fire Lord who help to make peace not war.

Dats all I got to say for na I'll post another comment later man peace!

I don't think you have Toph OOC, she is in her late 30ties now with a kid of her own, she's not 12 anymore. I love what you did with Suki and having Kuzon sleep with a stuffed dragon is so freaking cute.

I'm at a loss of what to do with Enki, part of me says Angi Kai but that's more for honor, the other part says lunch for the 'masters' dragons. I wonder if Katara should freeze a body part off or something but I'm still mulling it over. This was cute and cool, I liked it.

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I really really reaaaaly like this story! I hope that you update this and all of your wonderfull works soon! Your stories are what keep me going during this loong period in between episodes.

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I just found your story yesterday and have already finished reading it so far. I absolutley love it. I cannot wait to read the rest of it.

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Excellent as always! As far as punishment, I favor stripping Enki of his crown.

Like I already said, I really like this story, however, it makes me inda sad that it's gonna end soon. Your writing is good, and the characters are believable.

CAn't wait for Aang to show up, and best wishes!