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I've just read your last chapter, and want to thank you for the update! I can't wait to see what Enki's punishment will be...

Thank you for updating!!! I'd been waiting for this chapter in anguish! I really like your consistent portrayl of Enki as boorish and self-important. I feel bad for poor Miumi/Katara for having to listen to whatever awful long winded speech he gave. As for the Iyashii clan, treason and exceution is fine for the higher-ups, but that leaves the matter of their estates left for Zuko to clean up. Do you suppose that they'd be given to Mirharki's family? I remember Miumi considered sending a gift to show that there were no hard feelings (just before the kidnapping took place, when she tried to leave). That would be cool. At the beginning of the chapter, when Miumi dressed in the blue and gold robe, she mentioned that she felt like the Fire Lady again. Does this mean that she'll be returning to court, or wearing blue more often? One of my favorite drawings of yours is Firelord and his Lady, with Firelord!Zuko and Firelady!Katara where Zuko is in red/black, Katara in a pretty blue/eskimo/kimono thing. The costumes are just so pretty and appropriate. Though I also like A Match Made in Heaven. Is that for Miumi/Zuko, what with the fire sages blessing thier union and whatnot? ^_^ Anyways, your drawings are pretty, and your stories are awesome! You rock.

(Sorry, I forgot something I was going to say, so this is continued from the previous review. Thinking of your pretty drawings distracted me.)
But where's Aang?!?! Surely the Avatar would have been invited to something of this importance! And wouldn't Aang recognise Katara, since he has so much expierence with the Spirit world stuff, and just general avatar powers, what with his infatuation for Katara and whatnot. Which would in turn, freak out Miumi and possibly trigger her memories of being Katara? There's been forshadowing of Miumi regaining Katara's memories throughout this entire story. I really, really want to read how that happens. Also, why didn't we see Sokka/Hakoda in the trial? You mentioned the chiefs of the both water tribes, but not their names! You're killing me here! I need to know what happens! Please Please Please write soon! And thank you for writing this chapter, too.

great chapter~! still left us hanging with the punishment though...

i see, so affnet is the problem. i hope they fix that soon.

Just wanted to feed you and your muse with a review... ;-) Great story! I sometimes find that pieces which seek to be period-appropriate come off as halting or so overly-formal sounding that it renders the plot useless under a steaming pile of you-know-what. Yours is definitely NOT like that. It is realistic while maintaining the particular style with which you started. I love that though the tone is formal, there is still such a warmth to the story. I love the time you've spent developing the characters without giving us everything about them. I look forward to reading more!

Man Enki must be shitting kittens right now. The tension is very thick, and good. I'm loving how you're drawing out this tension. It was sweet to hear from Suki and Toph on the counsel. I'm dying to see what you do as a punishment. How about apointing a new queen instead of a king? The discription of the costumes are great.

I was just re-reading this [I'm currently at ch 8] and though I love this story and am enjoying it once again. God, I really wanted to smack the crap out of Katara/Miumi. I know with Zuko being Zuko and with the time period that Avatar is set in and just a number of other factors that she's not out of character but at the same time I just want her to turn around to Zuko and Kamas and just GAH! I don't know. For some reason tonight as I was reading I just wanted her to fight it more, why I don't know I just did lol. I just wanted to share that ^_^

However, enjoyed the story the first time and once again enjoying it for the second.

Still loving it~!

Enki should be...hmm...put him in a very hot cell, then put him in a very cold one! Give him the same fever as Kuzon did. Haha.

And may I note that throughout the recent updates of your stories, the biiig space is very evident.

first off,
i would like too say i've been following your story's for a long time
and they are AMAZING! :)

Your so gifted and talented, and u keep me entertained,
so thank you for that. :)

I love how you structure your storys
with the point of veiws of Zuko, Katara, and Kuzon.

It's unique and brilliant!! :D

Please continue with this
you are my HERO!!! :)



P.s. I hope the new chapters up soon :p


Don't be a stranger please write back :)
xxx

I just wanted to say that I just finished reading the "Kiss of Fire" story arc that you have... and it was brilliant, i really enjoyed the story line and how you kept Zuko in character. Im really looking forward to the next instalment and wish you all the best with it.
La'Sharna