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for Kiss of Fire

by Spleef

schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you weave your past stories with this one as well, so freaking great! I'm dying to know what/who is attacking! I wish your version was the ending; you'll always be my cannon.
person ZarakiKenRoby
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Spleef this latest chapter is quite the chliff hanger man, keep doing what you do best man!
person Jo
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh, shit. Of all the memories to consciously gain back first, it had to be her death. Ouch. I can see the shit hitting the fan. Thank you so much for your prompt update, I really hadn't expected anything so soon after the previous chapter(even though I checked. Hope springs eternal! ^_^;;) I'm glad you put the silk screen chapter in before the start of this arc. It really solidified Miumi's happiness with Zuko and living in the palace. And this was a lovely chapter as well, even if you did leave off on a cliff hanger. Cliff hangers bad! They make my brain hurt! Please update soon, and thanks for updating so quickly with this chapter! You're awesome!
person lavenderhilllove
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg you cannot just end like that!! Please please please tell me you have another update soon???? If you weren't such an amazing writer I'd be angry. Thank you so much for the update. It totally made my day twenty times better. ^_^
person moor
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say, I've LOVED catching up on these past few chapters -- how you've mixed in Katara's memories, brought the Fire Nation Royal Family closer together, and now, weaving in some of the most dramatic moments from Season Three and changing them ever so slightly to fit in with the rest of the story -- AMAXING! I love how you waited before bringing in some of Katara's 'final' memories and how they affected her, and I can't wait to see how you bring about your Third (final?) Arc in KoF. *^_^*

Thank you SO MUCH for always updating, I really look forward to your stories. ^_^b
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why aren't you getting more reviews for this story? I was especially touched by the last chapter, it was so well-written! The smut and teasing were awesome.
person Lavenderhilllove
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating! I was so excited to read another chapter. How much longer before Katara starts putting the pieces of the puzzle together? When do we see Aang or Sokka?
person rachel
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty much in love with your story
You capture Zutara so well and this chapter :D
wow. zutara love/fluff/lemon was brought to a whole new level.
can't wait for more :]
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum yum yum, very nice. I greatly enjoyed this.
person Jo
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write smut, Spleef. You're just awesome. As are your writings. Katara/Miumi and Zuko are just so sweet together. I like the way you use more interesting language, and describe things with words and phrases that let readers fill in the blanks themselves. Thank you so much for updating! And I'm so excited for the third arc! The first was discovery/coming to Sozin/early marriage second was Enki issues/trial/old friends. Is this one going to be old memories? Whatever, I look foreward to it. Will Aang finally show up? I've been wondering about that since you started writing. Anyways, I look foreward to it!