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This chapter was full of different emotions, even though I already read your story more than once, it still doesn't make it any easier. Nonetheless, strong chapter. I still can't wait for more chapters!

I cannot wait for more chapters to come out! I check back every day!

This review is for both Slow Heat and Kiss of Fire, as I just got caught up to speed with the two stories.

I really, genuinely must complement you on this story. I NEVER review after I read something, but in your case, I feel compelled to do so. Not only is your writing superb besides a few typos here and there, the story arc and events keep me interested. Reading your story has caused me to want to rewatch the Avatar series, as the events that you added between Zuko and Katara are noticeable, but they fit SO WELL with the overall arc of the actual series that it's impressive. I literally haven't been able to put my phone down because I've been reading. When Katara was killed, I was..actually upset. I love reading fictions that can bring about strong emotions from the reader. Anger when Katara died. Sadness when everyone was informed and she was sent to be buried. Betrayal when Zuko fathered other children. Fear when he tried to pull Kuzon and Katara apart with such intense scenes of turbulence. Jealousy at the way Zuko and Katara are in bed. The list goes on and on. The characters are portrayed beautifully, and all of their stories are lively and believable. As I read your stories, I wanted so badly for Katara to fall pregnant, as it was never mentioned that Miumi knows how to bend..that. I am excited to find out how it turns out. I feel like Katara should voice more of her want to bare her own child, as she is still young and would naturally want that. When I imagine Zuko finding out, I imagine him berating her and Katara threatening to rip the fetus from her womb to make her "beloved husband" happy.

Just my thoughts on the matter. I sincerely look forward to your update. You are a magnificent author.

I'm so excited that you put two new chapters up! I was looking forward to it so much that when I seen the new chapters I read them immediately! Keep up the wonderful work and post more soon please!

Wow, I'm very impressed with this story, and definitely glad that it is being updated (this site isn't very helpful telling me when you last wrote things, I had to infer from the comment dates that it is being updated). I'll be keeping an eye on your other works, as well!

Omg LOVE this story I check every day for a new chapter!!

This chapter and Startling Recollections were awesome, I got so excited when I seen them come out and I can't wait for more!!

Oh my gosh I was super excited when I saw the new chapter, but pretty bummed that it was short :( It's okay, I am so excited for more updates! Keep up the sweet work!

So happy to see the new chapter! Super steamy and very well written. I'm excited for the final story arc, can't wait! Keep up the good work!

Beautiful chapter! I am still captivated by your beautiful story. The whole story is awesome but the good stuff is coming! Can't wait :). Keep up the good work!