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for Kiss of Fire

by Spleef

person kubot
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun!! What a cliff hanger! I love this story and anxiously await the next chapter :)
person Masamune
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that your story is one of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I'm VERY glad I found this. Very glad indeed.

You make all the relationships seem...so real. Not to mention the characters. And the storyline itself blew me away. I can't keep from wishing that this had been canon in the actual show. And the effort you put into researching various cultures to incorporate into this is amazing as well.

Anyway, I could go on and on about how great your story is, but it's late and I'm exhausted, so I'll just tell you to keep writing because this is one heck of a good story. EXCELLENT job, one you should definitely be proud of.
person moor
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! So many secrts being kept--and so much coming together as Katara/Miuki realises more and more!!!! Please update soon!!!
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like it, love it, I want more of it. Of course Zuko's freaky over protectiveness is going to back fire in a huge way and it will be glorious. Love it can't wait for more.
person lavenderhilllove
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a cliffhanger! Please please update soon! I really want to know what's going on. Is Kuzon going to hate his brother or sister? When is the Avatar going to make a visit? When will Katara finally "wake up" and realize who she is?
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the last chapter!!! katara is preggo! I wonder how zuko is gonna take it...i wonder how he's also gonna react when she starts recovering more and more of her memories...
person luna26
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh...secrets..I can't wait to see which one breaks first. Excellent job as always.
person Raven
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another magnificent story, and one I also hope to see updated? I was really unsure about the Katara-reborn thing, but you've executed it perfectly! Well done!
person LinaStar
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible! It is by far the most intriguing and powerful stories I have ever read! I literally couldn't put this story down! I've even been neglecting homework to read! :D And now I've reached this cliffhanger and I want more! You really do have a gift for writing and your knowledge of the time period takes this story the extra mile! I hope and pray that you continue not only this story but also writing in general! I am so glad to have found this story!

I also wanted to comment on your characters! Of the original characters I have to say that I like Kamas the best. He's a very believable character and though he doesn't often say much, his character speaks volumes! You should be very proud of your accomplishment with him as well as your other characters both original and otherwise. Of course I am also very fond of Zuko and Katara (else I wouldn't be reading this story) and it is interesting to see how Zuko turned out after all those years. I am kind of sad to see Iroh gone, but such is life.

I promise to write more reviews if you promise to write more story! I found this story via FF.net, but I moved to read it at adultff.net so I could read the story in its entirity. I will also be marking this story as a favorite :P.
person WildWestSamurai
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah... about time she got such recollections back! Though I wonder if that's good or bad. Somehow, I doubt she'd be happy knowing Zuko married her for who she was in a previous life. Also, any chance of explaining why she was reincarnated sometime? Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

P.S. The sex chapter was HOT. Can't describe it any better and sometimes the simplest things say a lot.