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I love this story. I do hope that Katara gets her baby, though. Zuko already has children, yeah, but a girl can want her line to continue, too. Even if he does worry about losing her, I hope he can understand that. I hope you update soon :)

Wow! Been reading this story non-stop and I have to say it is wonderful, but then again most of your stories are! I've read a few and I am always increasingly amazed at the way you develop your characters. I am on pins and needles awaiting an update and until then i will be reading your other stories which I'm sure will be just as good.

To be honest with you, I think in general any story that claims to be a reincarnation or any sort of dramatic change to a main character for that matter, to be a Mary-Sue in shipper clothing so to speak. But after reading your other 'Zutara' fics, and seeing your drawings as well as, I found myself curious enough to risk reading what i assumed would be a disapointing story. How wrong I was! This story proves my earlier theory incorrect, it is possible to have a reincarnation story that is worth reading and is not a poorly disguised Mary-Sue.... I love this story and all the others I have read by you!

Awesome fic, love all the arcs youve created...now we just need the end

I been reading this story ALL WEEKEND all night hahaha!! love ALL of your stories and this is my TOP FAVORITE OF THEM ALL!! please don't take long to continue I'm really eager to continue reading!!

Thank you for updating Hot Water a couple of days ago! I found your fanfictions about a month ago and have been reading them almost nonstop since then, and I've finished with everything Avatar! :( Your stories are wonderful, and you "get" the characters - their personalities are spot on! I eagerly await more updates and Zutara goodness! If I may, though, I have only a small bit of criticism. While I love your writing style in its coherent-ness and formality, I feel that the same formality creeps its way into the dialogue, and there are many characters that just don't speak formally. Other than that, your stories are my favorite fanfiction ever! :)

I'm on Chapter 33: Amendments of Kiss of Fire. I had decided to look up good Zutara after my horrible experience with the Last Airbender movie. T_T I originally found Slow Heat before I discovered it was a prequeal. I really enjoy reading your stories. The grammar and spelling makes it feel like I'm reading an actual book and not a fanfic, so thank you for that. I would have reviewed before but I didn't have an account. I decided to make one, so that I could tell you that I appreciate the hard work you put into your stories. The characters are not OOC and stick to their original personalities well. You also do a good job of not overloading the story with OCs like a few other authors. I thought the original ending for Slow Heat was sad but original and I loved the alternate ending. I can't wait to finish reading Kiss of Fire and finding out what happens when Miumi/Katara remembers her past, or even if she does. I read books frequently and always love suspense. You leave out enough answers to allow the readers to speculate what will happen without leaving us confused. Thank you and please keep writing. ^_^

wow
enki really is that dumb
hmmm i wonder whether his kidnapping the firelord's son/wife will end well...

eeewwwwwww enki is sooo gross!
spleef, if you let him touch miumi i will not be impressed only writhing on the floor in disgust and ewishness

but YAY firenation ship on the horizon...

save her zuzu!!!

you manage to pack so many emotions into each chapter
horror, fear, excitement, revenge, relief, overjoy, sighs of contentment, awws of love

soo glad enki didn't touch miumi
and his comeuppance was fantastic