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pretty good stuff, I am curious on how the others will respond to Kim's little sexcipade, especially Ron ... boy's gonna be more then a bit pissed. good stuff, please give us more soon!

Terrific; not only was detailed and erotic, but I felt like I really understood what each character was feeling and what was going through their minds during all this. The ending was a little disappointing, but I'm very interested to see where it goes from here.

Dude, seriously you gonna continue this or not? It has great potential and it's been sitting here for months unanswered. if you don't want to finish it then at least put up a notice to say you've quit it.

Hmmm, Kimmie preggers? Maybe, maybe not. I've heard about that inhibitor; how it also inhibits a fetilized egg from sticking to the uterine wall... As for the pictures, I'm sure Wade could make them look photoshopped. (chuckling) Very nice work, I'd like to see how Kim exacts her revenge. Looking forward to your next installment. Be well. :)

nice. Hope Ron sees a little action. And with Kims skills and all the people looking out for her I hope it backfires on the Bonnie and co.

hey good start and tell us what's going on next and what is going to happen to her and Ron

hey good start and tell us what's going on next and what is going to happen to her and Ron

Why must so many fics leave Ron out in the cold?

Is it really so hard for him to get the sexual fun that isn't chemically induced?

Oh well. Be nice to see him go for some revenge on Bonnie, Shego, Brick and Josh. And of course, Kim should be punished too. Since it was her mouth and ego that got this mess started. but I guess it's too much to hope for to see Ron yank out a horsecock and turn out all the girls involved and make em his sluts.

Overall I thought it was a very good story. A couple of minor complaints if you don't mind. The title really should be "Cheerleaders Peek"? (hmmm should that be plural or possessive?) I don't think they did any mountain climbing, though it could be a play on words about Kim reaching an orgasm! Also, I thought Josh Menkey's character was a bit off. He was portrayed as an artist type and not a jock. I loved the use of the camera phone to capture proof of Kim's going down on Brick. Let me know what the URL for the web site is when those pics get posted! Do write a second chapter. Please and thankyou.

That was certainly a abrupt and lousy ending to what started out as a great story with the potential for Bonnie and Kim to have lots more hot sex.