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November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, start to finish, it flowed like air over a spring meadow, Full of tantalizing flavors and the scents of passions still yet to bloom. Only a very few typos and missteps, but Gods, this seriously rocked, writer!
So, as I've gone through your `Toph Always Tops` and `Bath Time` {and yes, there is the reason Why they're backwards, as I now reviewed on `B T`}, let me be clear that I read this First right now... and very much hope there could be more via a sequel to this one as well?
Jun says 'Katara' is beautiful, on the inside as her outside, but Jun (by canon) has had to grow Into a strong, independent woman. To remain strong so she can take what she wants. So later that night... The next dawn... When they come across bandits... A village, or waystation... People injured... Enemy soldiers...
All these, and other events, will show Jun just what it is to not only have a passion for, to yes, maybe really `Love` Katara, but to truly have 'Faith' in her {and to want Katara to have a measure of Faith in her}, to Trust her... to Honor her? Yes, `Forever` does seem like a marriage. And when Jun and Katara come to a village, and she treats the Water-bender not as an equal, her partner, but as a possessive lover would... because Jun somewhere decided to take and keep her. How does your Jun grow, and understand when she has indeed hurt that most special part inside Katara. When will she be hurt when, in the course of a fight, Katara turns to safeguard innocents, or takes aim at a soldier raising his sword against another, all the while leaving Jun to fend for herself. When it comes to claiming someone for yourself because of `love`, and instead coming to really learn its to take Everything that comes with having them in your life.
Jun is (well, certainly Has been, til now) a loner, and has seen from the Outside other couples, other families, and all the good and the bad they can and do to them and theirs.
Again, you really rock!!! This was damn fine. But.....
She wants 'more'. `Trust`, `Faith`, `Honor`, `Love`. Think, please? Just What might make for a good sequel??
Thanks again.
So, as I've gone through your `Toph Always Tops` and `Bath Time` {and yes, there is the reason Why they're backwards, as I now reviewed on `B T`}, let me be clear that I read this First right now... and very much hope there could be more via a sequel to this one as well?
Jun says 'Katara' is beautiful, on the inside as her outside, but Jun (by canon) has had to grow Into a strong, independent woman. To remain strong so she can take what she wants. So later that night... The next dawn... When they come across bandits... A village, or waystation... People injured... Enemy soldiers...
All these, and other events, will show Jun just what it is to not only have a passion for, to yes, maybe really `Love` Katara, but to truly have 'Faith' in her {and to want Katara to have a measure of Faith in her}, to Trust her... to Honor her? Yes, `Forever` does seem like a marriage. And when Jun and Katara come to a village, and she treats the Water-bender not as an equal, her partner, but as a possessive lover would... because Jun somewhere decided to take and keep her. How does your Jun grow, and understand when she has indeed hurt that most special part inside Katara. When will she be hurt when, in the course of a fight, Katara turns to safeguard innocents, or takes aim at a soldier raising his sword against another, all the while leaving Jun to fend for herself. When it comes to claiming someone for yourself because of `love`, and instead coming to really learn its to take Everything that comes with having them in your life.
Jun is (well, certainly Has been, til now) a loner, and has seen from the Outside other couples, other families, and all the good and the bad they can and do to them and theirs.
Again, you really rock!!! This was damn fine. But.....
She wants 'more'. `Trust`, `Faith`, `Honor`, `Love`. Think, please? Just What might make for a good sequel??
Thanks again.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, i remember this from a long time ago. i don't know what you did but it's very very good. i wouldnt mind if jun did the same to me. ha!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wholeheartedly approve XD
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can say without a doubt this is definitely one of the better Avatar fanfics I have seen, and absolutely the best Yuri one I have seen so far.
I look forward to reading the sequel in the next hour...
Well done!
I look forward to reading the sequel in the next hour...
Well done!
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my very favorite yuri ever written. YAY! I have such a crush on Jun and I have to hide it from my other Avatar-loving friends...
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok.. first of all.. Jun makes me so wet I cant even see straight! Great idea and GREAT job!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for that, we need more good yuri everywhere:)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I'm not really into yuri! It has to be exceptionally written. Like your! Can we atleast get an epilouge? Pweasssse!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yesh! That was quite awesome ^___^ Definitely a breath of fresh air in the Avatar section XD