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for A Fry to Remember

by Hatchan

person Atemai
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
i saw every bit of that in my head
woulda pissed myself laughing if i was retarded and had no bladder control
but i didnt cause im not
i think
whatever

:high five:
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
jawsome!!!
person mmh
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
phallyally. i mean that just *sounds* hot.
A+
person Sonja
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um, wow. This was kind of funny, and kinda -hot- at the same time. O_o
person Sheena
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. "He had never seen a fry that hard before"... Um wow. Disturbing, yet interesting....I could see you pulling off a sequal.... I feel so dirty *shivers*... I think I'll read it afgain.
person thequeenofdarkness
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is hilariously erotic.
person undenialbly_raziel
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *RUNS AWAY AND COWERS UNDER BED, WHIMPERING NONSTOP!!!* Interesting fic. Sick though. It would of been cool if Shake had caught them in the act...
person Undenialbly_Raziel
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I also forgot to add it was pretty freaking hilarious. I almost didn't want to read on further, but I JUST HAD to go on. Good job. As good as job you can get with fast food porn!!!
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I particularly enjoyed the "one fry harder than all the other...wanted this fry more than any other fry..." Funny as hell. Very nice, yo, very nice.
person Kim
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was cute. I liked the joke at the end, too.

~Kim~