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for Dancing Fools and Desktops

by TwitchableWiz

schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I bookemarked this story from the very beginning, and by the end I've made up my mind that I'll be re-reading this all the time.

And Butters' comment about Craig's weiner... I lost it. I couldn't stop laughing. This was wonderfully written. I loved every minute of it :D
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, I absolutely LOVE it!
I crave more of your writing...
And, I like how you wrote them just fine. A rating of five for me.
person one-eyed jester
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! That was amazing! I like odd couples but usually only if they've got some bdsm. You, however, most talented author have completely blown my mind. That was fantastic. You're first time? crap you should be an actual author. hot stuff.
person Si
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh. I cannot believe this is the first fic you've posted here because that was hot. Seriously. Best ever, and sets the standard for erotic fiction everywhere.
Write more please!!!! *begging*
person Corrie
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off, I've gotta say I chickened out and skipped the sex x3;; I'll read it in full tomorrow ^^

Second, just...aaghjsgbdgs. I'm now suitably raping my old N*Sync CDs, and have the urge to go to a dance club now. Shhuuu, don't tell anyone but I have danced to Space Cowboy when I did that sort of thing and you illustrated it well. Even better with grinding action. Haha, that was the best scene I've read in a long time out of anything because it was so...amusing and sexy and just, very true when it comes to school functions. You've ruined my ability to use proper english Dx

I loved Eric's portrayal xD He'd be the hottest DJ ever. dom!Tweek sounds fun, and definitely isn't something you see often. Craig was quite a sexy little Italian Stallion, being so self conscious about reputation, and then needy. Aw x3 God I can't get over this, it's so great and supertastic, fabuloustic, just...beyond the definition of warped adjectives.

Love ya Twitch
Corrie