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for Going Beyond Bonding

by Bonniefan

person Yikes
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YIKES!
person kitty
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* i like this a lot. You should really continue this, i like where its going. Kim is a prude hahaha!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Keep at it.
person SM
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Certainly an intriguing beginning. It's a little unique in that the discussion focusses on one relationship, while the situation itself explores another. I like that.
person death part 0
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice plz continue.
also the spelling and grammer is perfect ^^ did you get it beta'd
person hentairoses
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have done a execllent job and can't wait for the next update. So UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!