rate_review Reviews

Very nice one-shot! Not sure that Stormer really carries around that much contempt for the Holograms inside her, but maybe I need to watch that episode again to see if that's what she was really thinking. Either way, beautiful job on this one! Sizzling hot, steamy romance. I also liked Stormer's contented sex kitten moment there at the end. Kudos on a well-written story!

Finally, a Jem smutfic that is actually coherent...and plausible. I personally would have liked to see it drawn out a bit more however. I'm a sucker for *fiction foreplay* with a thick plot that heats up. But as for oneshots go, this one was one of the best I've read. Good job on it. You should try your hand at some Stinger smut...god knows that threesome exude it. oO;