AFF Fiction Portal
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a GREAT story, i look forward to reading more if you do write a sequel.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww soo cute! XD
person Demi-Helion
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo...Bravo...

Truly rare out there nowadays...

This deserves a sequel...

Again...Bravo...

Frankie and Mac...

How dreamy...

*sigh*

Er...Forget that last part... ~_~;
person don't matter
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great please write more
person pimpinbulbasaur
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man, rly liked this fic, i added you to msn, add me to its up there ^^.

Really good fic man hope to talk to you later.
person Fogu-s_tofu (NLI)
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I would like to see a sequil to the story.
I wonder if they would give their first kid the middle name Bloo?
Anyway, five stars.
person WS
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work on this peice dude, hope to read more of your work soon. *pulls a monkey with a tazer out of a small black bag* By the way, that wasn't a suggestion.
person General nazor
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Prity good stuff!
And for you'r 3'rd fic, three words:Gient. headed. kids!;]
person sweety
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!I like how you actually put in a storyline. There was more to it than just the sex. That's a good thing. Keep up the good work in your other stories if u plan to make anymore!
person Gizamon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story dude, i've been waiting for one like it.