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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds intersesting. ^_^
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool. E-mail me when you update!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good. please write more!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're right the grammar's terrible and you're wrong the spelling sucks too. How old are you? Obviously Off is spelled with two tees not one like you put it. Plus you butchered the monsters names and the characters were not really in character! It has a good plot and I really like it but you really need to work on the "English".
Other Then That Keep Up The Good Work,
JoxBox
Other Then That Keep Up The Good Work,
JoxBox
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story was great !!!
It was one of those stories I could keep reading and reading no matter how long it was. You are an exellent writer with many skills, the only slight problem was grammar but hey what is that compared to even a single paragraph of this story.
Thanks for Writing,
JoxBox
It was one of those stories I could keep reading and reading no matter how long it was. You are an exellent writer with many skills, the only slight problem was grammar but hey what is that compared to even a single paragraph of this story.
Thanks for Writing,
JoxBox
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great but the second chapter needed to have a little more porn or something along the lines of that. But great besides that.
Its Great!,
JoxBox
PS: Spelling is a must.
Its Great!,
JoxBox
PS: Spelling is a must.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Z.A.N.A." is spelled with a x
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its scipizoa
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its krabbe
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now thats what I call a story! Unlike the others you didn't jump right into porn- you made me feel the story first. FANTASTIC! I'll be looking forward to any future chapters...