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for Volcano

by Spleef

person swissnights
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in your story Zuko so knows how to make me wont to kick some brins in to that head of his...
She tells him he trits her like a slave and his said no but all ways says "mine"
When will he lurn when she trys to kill her self to get free??
person SleepingDragon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I can finally review!

Love the "what if" plot and I realllllllllly want you to continue!
person Miranda
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh,please write more !! I luv your writing! In all of your stories you can always vizulize whats happening I love it!

With all do respect, Miranda
P.S. If you dont finish the story "we"(points to angy mob) will have a visit.
person Anonymous
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you come back and finish this. I'm dying to see what happens on the ship. I hope Aang will be okay though. I want to see how Katara will react to being on the ship and how will she and Zuko will get along. Anyway hope to see you real soon here, and Hot Water. See you later!!!!
person out of my mind
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE THIS STORY SO FREAKING MUCH!!!!
couldnt resist, i love this story update soon and keep up the good work......
person dreadfully_missunderstood
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.... i really do... i have read it three times already because i just cant wait till you update..... i loved cold fire, and hot water, and i think i like the valcano stoy plot beter then the origional that is on hot water.... idk though, i love them all... you should write a book... lol
person dreadfully_missunderstood
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.... i really do... i have read it three times already because i just cant wait till you update..... i loved cold fire, and hot water, and i think i like the valcano stoy plot beter then the origional that is on hot water.... idk though, i love them all... you should write a book... lol
person ksbaby
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just some advice but maybe if it didnt take u so long to update the u would get more reviews..
person darkangle
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god! you should write a book.... i really loooove your stories....
person Der Metzgermeister
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You, err...ARE aware that multiple times, both here and in Hot Water, every now and then, you have a tendancy to refer to Zuko using feminine pronouns? XD