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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
speelf ur evil . you no just how to drug a person a lead them up to some g*d damned mountain and push dem off. dont no wat im talking about? i was all ready for the next chapter man and where was it? no where to be found (holding pounding head, while rubbing temples in anxiety) finish da damn chapter man! I hate but love how your stories keep me and my sister hanging untill we are still pathetically reading way past 4am.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Poor Aang, he can inspire loyalty but not enough passion in Katara. I look forward to more delicious tension between Zuko and Katara, their physical "reunion"; I predict will be a Volcanic Inferno based on the groundwork you are writing. I can't wait to read about it.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update a little faster and a lot more
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So thats what her burn means...
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's sad. Poor Zuko. I was waiting for this chapter for a while now. I so can't wait for another chapter. update soon. Later. K15
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter Spleef. So full of passion and i just wanted to give Zuko a hug and never let him go.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter, I almost can't decide what to beg for updates more on, this or Hot Water. Anyway, another fabulous chapter - I like how you had both of them talking about everything and NOT letting Katara fall into his arms easily. It's clear Zuko not only wants but needs her. She also feels the same on some level. However, I'm glad you're not making it easy for either of them, I think Katara resisting will be good for Zuko because he did lie to her and he is keeping her from something that seems to be really important to her. It's going to be interesting when they finally arrive back in the capital. I'm curious to see *everyone's* reactions. I'd love to see her have a conversation with Iroh, that would be another interesting scene to have happen.
More Soon!
More Soon!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOO SAAAAAAAAD!!!!! >cries< Whoah...the Fire Nation must have some creepy wedding if a burn is a sign of marraige (at least for the women)...I guess non benders use an hot iron or something? Poor Zuko...and poor Katara. Mega-heartwrenching points on this one...>sniff< Well...I can't wait to see how this might/might not be resolved...
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter amore^^ i myself cannot wait for more lol i liked how Zuko told Katara 'off' as it were teehee more please more
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, this chapter was sort of okay. I do hope that Zuko would understand how Katara feels and would help make her feel better. I also do hope that Katara would be okay and show Zuko that she doesn't hate him and tell him how she feels about this. I do hope that they'll reach a solution that will make them both happy. Anyway hope things will get better for them soon, keep up the good work and see you later!!!! I'm glad you update this, though.