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by Spleef

person Anonymous
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. This chapter is pretty interesting. It sounds like Aang was being a little overprotective with Katara, and those events from Sozen probably traumatize him for life. I do hope that Katara will be okay and that she and Zuko will find a way to make them both happy. Anyway good luck with Hot Water, see you real soon.
person Fyiarah
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Another great chapter, Spleef! Only one spelling mistake that I can see, it was Soxen, instead of Sozun...

Anyway, can't wait for more!
person fir123
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dannng you wrte good i hope you can write more on this story
person Kimono
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If Katara could hear me and looks could kill I would be dead for this but score one for Zuko! I never actually considered the fact that Aang was trying to control her life-most of his actions just came off to me as clingy. Wonderful chapter Spleefie! I look forward to quatre.
person koi
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS GOD I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL U UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER
person koi
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS GOOD VERY GOOD I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL U UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER
person InkHeart
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ow ow! That just ... WOW! That kind of arguing is exhausting to read. Extremely well done! I happen to agree with Katara about her burn. Marraige is a partnership. If she didn't even have a say or knowledge in her being married, then it isn't really marriage. But it makes an excellent plot twist! So Zuko's finally taken Iroh's advice about a taking an evening walk to clear the head, eh? Good for him. I LOVE YOU (figuratively, of course)! *glomps* Keep going (at a pace you feel comfortable with, of course though)...
person queenyasha
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This Zuko seems a little meaner than the other zuko in the main Hot Water. I guess I can understand me being married and all. But for Katara's sake she had no prior knoledge that she was married. So I can understand her feelings as well. One question though... About how many times had she slept with Aang? Cause I think she could count the times on one hand compaired to the times she slept with Zuko. As usual your story inspires me and sends chills down my spine. My husband thanks you for the chills by the by.
person death comes everyday
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love your story but r u gunna make a sequel for both hot water and volcano or just hot water?
person nicole
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOh....evil cliffy, also very sneaky how you have been hintng at the meaning of the mark in hot water and explaining it in a different story. I must say I had my suspicions but your explanation was superb. Well again another beautifully written chapter and I look forward to your next update. P.S. I am so in love with Zuko, his personality is so well written that I question your disclaimer. Also I must agree on your a/n about th season finale although I also thought that the fortune teller episode foreshadowed their relationship but hey I'm a sucker for the whole fire vs water, opposites attract thing!