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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
E-mai me when you update. I liked it, though your grammar was often off.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well written story. Keep moving along with it it would make a good short novel.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the best stories I have ever read and it deserves more chapters!
A 10 out of 10
10/10
Sincerely,
The Reviewer
PS: Write more chapters!
A 10 out of 10
10/10
Sincerely,
The Reviewer
PS: Write more chapters!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done Hosagi, :D
I have to say I liked the style, typical anime. However...
-Your storyline is typical anime (you may be going for this, maybe not)
-Characters are introduced swiftly with no time to get to know anything about them.
-Nightwolf is god and will come with a ninja posse next chapter. along with a sqord that fires nukes.
-Very rushed you want to show off so many key things all at once not giving any build up to an epic battle etc.
-Blonde has an e in it XD
Im no english teacher spelling in my reveiw will be horrible along with my gramma.
-Anarchy
I have to say I liked the style, typical anime. However...
-Your storyline is typical anime (you may be going for this, maybe not)
-Characters are introduced swiftly with no time to get to know anything about them.
-Nightwolf is god and will come with a ninja posse next chapter. along with a sqord that fires nukes.
-Very rushed you want to show off so many key things all at once not giving any build up to an epic battle etc.
-Blonde has an e in it XD
Im no english teacher spelling in my reveiw will be horrible along with my gramma.
-Anarchy
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo i like good story line, and spelling, only think i think you should do is make the chapters a bit longer and maybe not as strait forward, but hey thats just me lol. but back to the point 2 thumbs up =)