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for Save Me

by lilvior

person Rotzi
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Save him usin' Chase.

Gya! I wanna read more!
person Keri
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can I save him? no? man ): Okay, then Chase. Chase es sexah :0
person Zet
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make Chase save him please ^^
person Zet
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and make sure they have sex! xD
person Goldbryn
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um...I liked this story alot. He was so emo...but he's THAT kind of character ^_^ I love him.
I would want Chase to save him...
Or better yet...someone REALLY random ^_~ liiiike...Clay! yay! Dude...the monks could SO have thought Jack was planning something evil during his absense and sent a one or more to snoop...^_^ Sorry...I think of this stuff way too much!!
Omg...
I love Jack!!
person Madamdragon(not signed in)
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice I would like Chase to be the recuer! I think that would be Awesome!
person HalfOfHer
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww Poor Jack!! =( I want Chase to save him! I love the first chapter.
person Damia
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Make Raimundo come and be the gallant prince! ^.^ Poor Jacky... *sniffles* Great start, btw!

~Damia
person kittey
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote save him. Rai needs to save him ^^ that way the story can be comtinued XD the depressingness was good. I haven't really read a depressin fic in a while. or at least, not a good one. This one was good though, so I hope to see a new chapter soon.
person Maiden Moon
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ow, I felt that! This has got to be one of the angstiest fics I've read in a while, and puts the category of "dark" into a new standard. You've got a really good style for writing these introspective pieces!

Would someone just give the poor boy a hug already?!