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He should be saved, Clay should do it, they should become good friends maybe deeper, Jack should mve away from his parents.

Clay please! There isn't enough of that out there, and truthfully, Clay seems like the only one who would be willing or able to save him. Chase is a dick, Rai is...well Rai, but Clay is gentle and kind, and no matter WHO Jack is, there is no way he would let him die.

Oh oh!!! Chase saves him from dying, and Rai saves him from Chase! eventually at least.. *ebilgrinz*

i totally think that Raimundo should save jack! They are soo cute together and he really deserves to be happy cause he always goes through crap!

CLAY!

*raises brow at all the fellow Chack fans*

...Have you considered the option...that *all* of them save Jack??

Perhaps, Chase could find him while visiting for something he wants...takes him to the temple believing the good guys can fix him...

Then you can control who you want to pair him with. Chase could check up on him (because if you save someone like that of course it will be on your mind) And if Jack was getting worse then perhaps Chase could try to fix things himself.

Also, I am really kinda offended by the content of the story... so its not personal..

I know what depression is like, and I know what its like to hurt myself like that, I know what its like to be suicidal and you kinda making it glamorous is just kinda making me angry. Sorry for being such an ass in my last review... though I did I have some points, I believe.

I think Jack needs to be 'saved' by the entire temple. He needs a lot of people to surround him with love and some discipline to teach him not to treat his body like that.

(BTW, I think you made him a BIT too depressed still... try to tone it down. He's a man after all, and they don't feel things the same way women do. They're a lot less prone to going through this sort of thing, and many when they do don't allow themselves to show it.)

Nooo! Poor Jack! Chase must save him!

I like this story, the whole Jack is suicidal and commits it seems to be a common theme... one which I while I admire people for writing it I just don't like it... So if you really will save him... either Chase or Rai. Altough Chase should still be mean while doing it if you use him, he still has to be him after all. I hope you do continue this story, oh and Bring Me to Life I read on the normal ff.net, loved it... and no I don't mind Jack getting killed except by himself. It's not that I won't admit that people can't justify him doing it, I just like the poor huy to live. :_:

I vote chase! I cant help it I love the pairing.