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by starfirekiller

person Contec
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I could help you with the spelling and some other stuff.. mail me
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hir
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be much better if you used punctuation and capital letters - it would be much easier to understand what was going on. Also, toss an adjective or two in there, give us some idea of what's going on.
person ???
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd like it alot better if it were stich and there was no rape. Then it would be alot better. But still people are bound to hate this.