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March 31, 2019 at 12:00 AM
love it
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please make more chapters for this ok? OR I WILL RIP OUT YOUR EYEBALLS SHOVE THEM DOWN YOUR THROAT RIP OFF YOUR DICK (if you have one) AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR OWN ASS AND WILL PAY A BUNCH OF LITTLE GIRLS TO BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOU WITH BATS AND OTHER WEAPONS!!!!!!!!!! Just kiding hahahahahahaha But really make more chapters ok?
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November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome that made my fangs drip next can get Leroy to take angels 3 virgin cards before. Stitch that wood be so lol :D
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
could use a rewrite. extend it a little and capitalize properly.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was good if you take out the fact that it wasn't descriptive, the punctuation was laking, and the grammar kinda blew. It is a friendly hint, use spell check.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well lemme put it this way. As much as I love 627 to death and all (including the fetish you used that I didnt like no offence, but it was actually really funny lol), no offence but that could still use alot of work like some of the other reviews said. I understand that this was your first time by the looks of it and knowing that I can say you did an ok job ^^ I hope to see more of 627ness WOOT
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:\ pretty much bad smut as expected.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well... it was amazingly short and undescriptive, but i suppose its ok
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good idea, bad writing. Spelling and punctuation make a story more readable. It was a good fic though.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make more!!!!!!!! I like it. Only complaint is spelling and grammar but hey, no one's perfect. More! More! MORE!!!!