rate_review Reviews

for A sleep over

by Toamon

person Aysha

schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM

That was really good more would be better. =^_^=

person RichardH

schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM

...*sigh* well, it was hot... but it could have been a little longer and more detailed... maybe a bit slower too

person joe

schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

great

person inuyashademon345

schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM

hmm good needs another chapter but you need some penitration here

person madetowin789

schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM

THIS IS A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!

person JoxBox

schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This was very good but I recomend adding the first chapter to the second chapter to make it one long chapter. This is because first of all somebody who wants to know if this is a good story is going to scan through the first chapter if the chapter is boring they won't read. Also try to spell your chapter titles correctly.

This is just a suggestion,
The story rochked anyway !!!
JoxBox

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