rate_review Reviews

awesome story...great idea too!

wow great story, I actually got turned on reading that ;o nice style you have. Keep it up <3

Okay, you know a story is good when you're grinning like an idiot from beginning to end, with uncontrolled bursts of laughter in between. The writing style is so rich and vibrant that you feel as though you're "watching" a cartoon episode as you're reading. ("That was a zuchinni.") The characters are in character (within the limits for an adult fan-fic) and the situations are both silly and sexy. Yes, I know this is a fan-fic OF a fan-fic.
However! I must say that the ending, when Shego and Kimmy are doing the computer sex thing...it doesn't work for me. I don't know, maybe it's just that I don't personally "get" computer sex, or maybe that the sudden switch in their characters from adversaries to online lovers was too much, too fast...
In any case, I am green with envy for you accomplish what I attempt, but this will not keep me from being a fan of your work. You have my respect and admiration. Peace and Tranquility be with you. :)

*cheers and roots to continue* woo woot come its coming its going and its there

stares in amazement.....just bloody brillent

OMG i love your facfic it is the Best that i have ever read. Please make another one and send it to me personaly at Shaye12321@hotmail.com. Thanx so much

Good stuff, excelent, some minor spelling issues and the scene changes were a little rough, although I don't see how they could have been made significantly more smooth, it was kind of nice that it took a moment to realize the scene changed. Really though, I liked it, good fanfic, write more!