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I liked this story would like to see a little more depth to the scene additional details and such but excellent work nonetheless

That was so cool! As a fellow descended gypsy I was proud of the fact that Esmeralda didn't cry or anything, she held her ground even after being raped by Claude Frollo and even at the end tried to attack him. Bravo! They were both in perfect character.

I read the 'unedited' (I think) version on ff.net.. Nicely done. I love this. Very creepy, but slightly hot. I've got a Frollo/Esmeralda up on this site now. Review? :-) I LOVE this pairing.

Deliciously twisted and evil. I like this very much indeed. :) Made my day.

Poor Esmeralda.... Interesting how you went with the route that once he had her he'd be bored with her. Instead of the route from the book that suggested he was poisoned and obsessed with her (and might have kept her a wee bit longer). Interesting... though the idea of him 'just ripping' off her dress seemed implausible. It probably would have been more likely for him to lift her skirts to her waist. Seeing as he didn't even touch any other part of her. Other than that it was an interesting read.

*shudders*