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for The un-simple life

by englishwitch2003

schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I admire your courage in tackling these two issues of homosexuality and naturalism.
I am not as brave as you and tend to shy away from these topics.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A vary nice Lill story!
I espesualy liked when She and Nick got theyr mate on!
And I realy look forward to when she drops that baby!
That was some nice nature show-like stuff!
person skeeve
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I can really relate to both Lil's and Betties sides of the story. The story itself is very well thought out and executed. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
person Joe
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 6, oh the suspense lol. this story is awesome! please update soon
person trab
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
get some dsex in here
person TB13
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Lil's in trouble,Lil's in trouble!! Na-na-na-na-na-na-na!!!! This was perfect!! Please update soon so I can see waht happens to Lil when Bettie finds out!!
person trab
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE IT
person Anto!!
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it!

I liked "All Grown up - And How!!" and have grown used to your writing style.

Update soon!!!!
person Genrealnzor
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A good start keep it up please!
person toamon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, but get some sex in it.
something unexpected, like she meets dil at the beach or something