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for The Fire in Her Eyes

by SmilingandStabbing

schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story.
person Ivana C.
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. This was awesome! I wish you would do more to the story, perhaps a sequel...? I really loved it. I am speechless!!!
person Judith_the_Dark
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting little story you've got here. I thought the characters were well written, there really wasn't any trace of OOC-ness and I liked the plot line. As a victim of rape I can relate to the last part of this story quite well. And I do believe you did a great job!

For a first fic in a new fandom (as I assume that this is) is was a very well-done one. Bravo!

~Judith
person sailorgirl16
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was almost it's really good...So when are you gonna update it hope it'll be soon okay later days!
person crumbobulus
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fics that I have ever read. I really can't even add anything to that. Your story was awesome...
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just wow. You portrayed the characters perfectly or as close to perfect as I could possibly imagine; (Tucker's always a third wheel. I'm sure he'd choose his PDA over getting laid anyday... u_u() )
Know what? I liked the ending. Not only is it realistic (as you said), but it's filled with heart-wrenching angst! Yes, by the end, I was on the brink of tears. You have made a fangirl very happy, especially since you're continuing this story.
person memyselfandi
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this - it's realistic.
person wola
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was good give yourself credit
person thechickenlittle!
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first off, there was very little ooc, and i thought that this rocked! dear heaven, this was fabulous, and don't you dare put yourself down about it again! or i'll haunt you!
person InnocenceKept
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story!!! ^^ I love DannyxSam, and it was really unique how you wrote their relationship more realistically. I think it was well in-character for both of them, (and most everything else was in-character rather well) I especially loved the background bit on Ember, since most of the ghosts don't really have any past life info, so that was refreshing. I loved every bit of it, but I can understand writing the first fic in a fandom and struggling. I think you did an awesome job though *hug*

~Sammy