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for Cold Shoulder

by AloofandAndrogynous

person Arwey
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I said...totally addictive. Perhaps you should put a warning up, ne? Lolo, can't wait for more!
person Catt
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Girly that chapter was really sweet and endearing. It really allowed me an insight on Pakku. I can understand how hard sharing his emotions are and well you made good points on both characters sides its hard not to like them both!!! I really enjoy how you play them out and how they well came to an agreement. Excellent girly, can't wait for the next chappie! Byes!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The end of the chapter was kinda sweet...lets hope things improve and katara becomes happy
person Arwey
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A suprisingly addictive pairing...can't wait for more!
person Kuu-sama
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome 2nd chapter. Though I hope Pakku gets over his superiority complex soon... He sounds like he could become abusive... TT_TT

...so how about that KataraxJeong Jeong? She *could* calm him, what with water's soothing effect and all... ;)
I'm for the KataraxTeo too... I'm sure Teo's father could invent something to make them getting together easier...
Oh...just pair Katara up will any hott male human in the series and I'll be happy.
^^;

I bow to you, oh Queen of Crack Pairings.
person Anita
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeee this is so cool! It's very well written, and I absolutely adore how well you've captured the characters. And, oh queen of crack, can I suggest one whacked-out crackalious pairing~? Pakku/Sokka/Hahn or just Pakku/Sokka >>;; *dodges the pitchforks*
person Shane
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH. I love this. You got Pakku's personality down pat.
person Tygerlily
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, things aren't looking too good for our friend Pakku. He really needs to learn how to control that temper of his. Katara's reactions to everything, including him seem to be right on. I mean especially for a young girl like Katara to just be married off like that. The lashing out is to be expected. However, it seems Pakku is just fanning the flames on this one. I don't know but I think he's going to have to do a lot more just to find a nice common ground with her, let alone gain any affection from her. Sighs. Poor Pakku ^.^

More Soon Please!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter one...that was actually a very arousing sex scene! And then chapter two...well, it felt very realistic and you captured Paku's personality well...
person lovesrainscent
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I must say I am captivated by this story.