rate_review Reviews

Your Pakku/Katara conversations and arguments feel very real, thats one of the reasons this fic is so wonderful to read.

...Wow. I wasn't expecting to like this but I read your Iroh one and really liked that one...So I became curious and read this one. Even if I don't really like the pairing. xDD I adore crack pairings, though! So this was fun.

And ideas? Just poke me and a pairing will pop out. Zula/Ozai. :D Or something with Jun in it...I adore Jun. Of course, my favorite Jun pairings are cracktastic...Jun/White haired man(Black robed guy in Ep 14) and Jun/her Shirshu(If you can take Beastiality o.o).

But uh yea, I'm rambling. I hope you continue writing crack pairings. :DDDDDD

nicely done! very unconventional pairing,but very well done!

Great chapter as always ^_^ Its sad though how much you can see pakku is trying. Katara just needs time and he has to keep on trying! ^_^ I have hope for them yet and I was wondering how about a pairing with katara and another fire bender? Like zuko's sissy? I don't know just weird with that or another zuko and katara pairing would be cool too. Or better yet make like your own character. I'd like to see how'd that would turn out. Keep on writing! Good luck!

Pakku/Katara angst and drama! Oh noes! And you left us with a cliffie!

Wow How bout some fluff!!

Yay an arguement! That means make up sex...?

cum on more please!

Yay! Katara/Pakku semi-fluff! That was a really nice chapter and it seems that Pakku is progressing nicely when it comes to controlling that temper of his. Both are so true to character and again that just makes this so nice to read. I'm glad that their relationship is progressing but I'm curious... what about Sokka and Katara's father? Are we going to be seeing either of them anytime soon? I have to wonder what those conversations would be like, especially the one between father and daughter. I'd also like to see Katara and Pakku at a public function or just out in public together besides their lessons, that'd be another interesting scenario to see.

Again this chapter was absolutely fabulous! Hope to see more soon ^.^

Ah well, most times one resorts to physical violence when confused... Should of known Pakku was old enough to keep his emotions in check. :) I love the tenderness in this chapter. Aang keeps getting mentioned though, is he going to make an appearance soon?
I really enjoyed Katara's rationale in this chapter though. I think you captured her really well.