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for Cold Shoulder

by AloofandAndrogynous

schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a very riviting story not a fan of Katara/Pakku persay but this was worth the read and it helped while i was bored out of my mind lol, say why not do a Zulu/Katara fic next? Better then all that bloody awful yaoi that runs amok here
person asdfghjk
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! I never thought Id see a Pakkatara story...much less a well written one!!! This rocks! PLEASE update!
person Arwey
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! I wonder what Pakku is planning though?
person Gin
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was fantastic...I cant wait for 6!
person Tygerlily
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, Oh please, Oh please tell me that its finally hit Pakku that he didn't create a necklace for Katara and that he's finally going to carve one for her and her alone. I really hope so, this chapter was really good but so sad. I'm glad Pakku is figuring the puzzle out but I hope Katara can soon see that Pakku is really trying. I'm glad you touched on the issue of their actions in public and things like that. Hanh is a huge jerk, I'm so glad *both* Pakku and Katara put him in his place. Pakku being all possessive is really sexy, I think if Katara was able to witness a similar situation herself, she'd appreciate his possessiveness, even with her independant nature. I also have to wonder if we'll see Katara's father or Aang and Sokka as the story progresses.

Anyway, another fabulous chapter - well worth the wait - although I hope to see chapter six up *real* soon! ^_^
person queenyasha
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww Is somebody planning a suprise?!?!?!?! We love to come home to surpises!!! Yippie!!
person Lorenge
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahahahhahahaahha! Get it on, Pakku
person Gin
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Crack is good...I for one am awed by how you handle this couple-its very reaistic and works very well. I am going to check out your other work and look forward to chapter 5.
person Lahei
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(whistle) this is good stuff! And the sex scene was very good...
person Tygerlily
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so excited to see a new chapter of this. Oh, poor Pakku, he seems to be really trying to open himself up to Katara. I hope that he's able to help her see that what he said on their wedding night wasn't true and that he really does care for her as Katara and not as Kana. I still have to wonder about how Katara would react to her father if she were to see him now or even how Pakku and Katara would conduct themselves in public. For some reason, even if they did come to an understanding, I see Pakku being extremley possessive - but that's just me.

Anyway, I hope to see more soon!