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April 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that this is a good story, but there are two major flaws that I have seen. One is that Katara's dad would never force her to marry, (This one cant really be fixed as it would mess with the story) and two throwing Katara's original neclace out a window into a canal would piss her off something bad. That is the only memento she has of her mother. Past that it is a good story.
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August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is that the end, or are you planning to make more? It's a favorite of mine.
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December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I wish you would do more with it.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just have to say that I really thought this was your best story. I was not too sure how well this story would be because of the age differnce but you did it very well. I am curretnly writing a story with Mai and Zuko about an arranged marraige so reading this has given me some thought on how Mai and Zuko would react.
I hope that if you continue to write that you do something with Mai and Zuko. I don't know if you do request but if you do please do a Mai and Zuko.
Again very nicely written!!!!!!!!!!
I hope that if you continue to write that you do something with Mai and Zuko. I don't know if you do request but if you do please do a Mai and Zuko.
Again very nicely written!!!!!!!!!!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i could have sworn i reviewed this already, but it looks like i didn't! well i love it! they are so absolutely perfect together and the way the intereacted together in your fic added other dimensions to their relationship. when i saw that episode in book one i knew someone had to do a fic of them together, thank you for being that person! and doing it so well! it is exactly how i imagine them, and their personalities were spot on!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i notice the subtle changes... tight. :)
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job, keep it up
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At first, i was a bit concerned, with Pakku's age. But it's realistic. I just sat and read all 7 chapters. nice.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in all seriousness, KataraxTeo might be interesting, but KataraxJeongJeong WOULD be 'hawt'. i wasn't sure if i'd like this, but it turns out i REALLY do. way to go.