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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was well written :D The only help I can offer is that his name is spelled Zhao. Not a big deal though. I just wish you had continued on with this instead of resaying what we knew. It was great to hear it from his pov though, great writing :D
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply Beautiful.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Veru nice. Very nice indeed.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's okay, but it's basically what we saw in t.v, u just describing it, it's not fun to read what you already saw in T.V., you know that's copyright, if you added your own scenes it would have been wayy more fun to read.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good you might want to try and make a sequal "A good factual one" on what happens next in his life
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting peice.
very well done. i love it!
very well done. i love it!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it ^_^
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really good. I like how you told the whole finale in Zuko's POV. I like how you decided where he stands now. it was really good..... but as a correction (in case you plan on writing any more that might have the admiral in it) it's Zhao... not Jiao :D