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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I'd like to say that's it's great that someone out there is writing a Serpentor fic, as they are sadly lacking on the world wide web. Keep up the good work.
In your last chapter (ch 6) you mentioned that you were looking for suggestions as to their first meeting. Well, here's my two cents worth.
During the 80's GI JOE continum, Serepntor was suave, and charasmatic- the Baroness fell for him for a brief time; must to the Disgust of Destro
The current GI JOE continum (put out by Image and Devil's Due publishing) choose to focus on his military bearing; his ability to inspire loyalty and enthusium-only to use it to furthur his own agendas.
My personal viewpoint is that Serpentor has too much ego and conceit to rape a woman, his pride wouldn't allow it.
In regards to your story, I think I'd be reallly funny to have him try to seduce Joanna, only to have it blow up in his face.
In your last chapter (ch 6) you mentioned that you were looking for suggestions as to their first meeting. Well, here's my two cents worth.
During the 80's GI JOE continum, Serepntor was suave, and charasmatic- the Baroness fell for him for a brief time; must to the Disgust of Destro
The current GI JOE continum (put out by Image and Devil's Due publishing) choose to focus on his military bearing; his ability to inspire loyalty and enthusium-only to use it to furthur his own agendas.
My personal viewpoint is that Serpentor has too much ego and conceit to rape a woman, his pride wouldn't allow it.
In regards to your story, I think I'd be reallly funny to have him try to seduce Joanna, only to have it blow up in his face.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The idea of Serprentor's biological clock ticking cracks me up. You look like you had fun writing this one. A little constructive criticism: Watch Joanne to make sure she doesn't slide into Marysueism. Otherwise, keep up the prolific work! I await the next installment. Grin!