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for The Search for Serpentor's Bride.

by Solaris

schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is great I look forward to reading more! You've left us hanging!
person JasonLeeScottFan
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is Awesome! I love it! Please update ASAP as I can't wait to see what happens when Joanna meets Serpentor and if he will actually fall in love with her and vice versa!
person Ox King
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you wont finish this awesome story. Please rethink about it.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Updating this at all?

ch6
person kyushi2002
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, please contue the story
person padawan_jinx
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, after YEARS of missing this cartoon, and yes I watched all the original air-dates, I must say I forgot most of the characters. However, your story had brought many memories back and I wanted to say EXCELLENT job! THere were a few continuity errors, but the story is strong enough to overcome that. As for Joanna and Serpentors first meeting, I think you have written a very strong female character and think she will just scoff at him and look at him like he's dirt. Maybe he can try to woo her and since his gang fear him, they all stay away so he can make a lovestruck fool of himself. *giggles* Maybe too much wine. LOL Anyway, it is your story and I cant wait to see where you decide to take it. Thank you for bringing back memories and writing this facinating story! PJ
person DALV
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very awsome story! Please continue!
person Mermaid Ninja
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Joes better hurry before Serpentor REALLY cripples her!!!
person Dini
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey when are you going to update this?? I like your suggestion...I think Joanna should also struggle against Serpantor...I don't see her as a willing bride especially after they killed her father!
Great story so please update soon!!!
person vixey
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. cant wait for the next chapter