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OoooH so hotness. i i was tunred on does this mean im into beastality or something? My only negative comment would have to be just how much does G. weigh. I mean i think he would be a good... well idunno pretty heavy. Elisa wouldnt have much of a bed. doggystyle is hotness!

Great fic!
Good plot, I like your use of a new character to get the plot going and your pacing in the sex scene. Great.
I want to suggest a little more detail though, there were times when I wondered things like, "what did Goliath do with his wings? did he cape them during the sex scene or did he let them hover above the both of them?"
"Where'd he cut the bra? If he cut it in the front, between the cups (which is sensual and hot,) Then she's still got it hanging off her arms, if he cut at the straps, it's still attached to her waist (annoying), If he cuts at the back, he might as well have just undone the thing"
Also, it was wonderfull to add in the inadvertant emphisis of cleavage, but goliath didn't react!
Adding in some sort of effect it had on Goliath or his flying would have really given that scene a boost.

Yep. That has to be the best Gargoyles fic I have ever read. I grew up with the show, and always thought that Elisa and Goliath belonged together (Sexual tension abounded with those two!). And your rendition was perfect. The characters were very much true to self, and the drama of the third party (Aiden) was a brilliant lever to bring out Goliath's territorial nature concerning Elisa. Bravo!!! I heart this!!!!

There isn't enough Goliath and Elisa stories out there, they make a great couple. But there is one small problem with the story, Goliath is not Blue he is Lavender or darkish Purple.

“Goliath, what h-has gotten in t-to you,” she asked breathlessly.

“I’m claiming what is mine,” he growled out before ripping her short skirt...

O_o!!!

Goliath and Eliza...sigh...

=Fans herself and faints=

“I didn’t like the way that male was looking at you. He was courting you after I’d already laid claim at Xanatos’ office. When you didn’t seem that resistant to his advances, I decided it was time to show you who you belonged to,” he stated.

O_o!!!

BLOODY HADES IS GOLIATH HOT!!!

=Fans herself and faints=

A most passionate story. Could u please write some more.

In the meantime...

=Hunts down her husband=

I agree with Ida, Elisa is too much of a cop to wear heels and a skirt to a hunt, she knows that would be just dumb to wear when you're going to fight a gargoyle. Otherwise, I LOVED IT!!! Absolutely, there are not near enough Goliath/Elisa pairings, and yours is fantastic. Please add more, I hope yours is not a one shot.

Very nice! Goliath would definitly be one of those men that would need another treading into their territory to wake them up:) Idiots.
My only complant was Elisa's outfit. She knew she was going to track down Demona. Having had experience with that in the past, and considering her character, I really had to force myself to keep reading when she dressed up in both a skirt AND strappy shoes to go on a demon hunt with Goliath and Co. It just didn't seem reasonable *at all*. I can see her reasons for wanting to, perhaps. Goliath would definitely notice, but given their characters, and your establishing Aidan as a threat, I hardly think the outfit was necessary. Nice story though:) Thank you for posting.

I really loved this story. I love to read a good Elisa and Goliath.