rate_review Reviews

Excellent story so far. I'm wondering what made you stop? If you don't have time to write it anymore, I would be willing to do so for you if you would like. My email is digiron91@hotmail.com if you want to talk to me about it.

^looks at the date this was last updated^ . . . Shit. Why must I always get interested in the discontinued ones!?!? ARGH!!!!

^sigh^ Needless to say, I very much enjoyed what you had posted so far. So, if you ever plan to continue this, I would love to read more. ^_^

I'm liking it so far but when is skulker coming in this story and actually having him be w/ Danny? Anyway, keep up the good work.

omg cool story please update

I love this story so much...you have no idea how great it is to finally find someone who takes time to do a story well. I applaud you! (And ignore the stupid flamers, they obviously think they have a say in what we authors do)

I love this fic so damn -much-. Great example of AWP (angst with plot, heh). The style is engaging and pleasing to read, while the grammatics are held firmly as well. There wasn't even any of the intended slash yet, and I still couldn't bring myself to be upset with it. XD Excellence. Can't wait to find out what happened to Danny! ;.;

It also felt wiggly inside to have read All Quiet on the Western Front beforehand. But I digress. ;P <3

Man, this is a wicked awesome fic! Sorry I didn't post comments on the other ones, but I wanted to read the whole thing first! I luv this story so much, it's completely original! Your descriptive words are awesome, you really know how to captivate the reader. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up! *hands you cookie* You earned it!

ahh I like this alot! ^_^

I did spot a few grammatical mistakes in the chapters, but they can be easily fixed.

Please update soon! :D

GASPS! I read this fic a while back, but I can't belive I din'r reveiw it!!!!! I thought I did wich was why I....Oh, never mind, the point is I'm reveiwing now to say *clears throught* PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I check every time I log in to see whether or not you've updated yet. *puppy eyes* update soon? I'm a huge fan of yours....

Glad you reposted. As enjoyable as your writing with plot is- and believe me, it's quite enjoyable- it's my duty as a seriously screwed-up dark yaoi fan to ask: when are the angsty flashbacks? ...it's not that I don't like the story... it's just... well... story vs. angsty mentally disturbing flashbacks... um... Okay I'm shutting up on that subject. Good fourth chapter, nice to see it again, and the fact that I got Skulker correct made me all warm and fuzzy inside. I had a flamer once who I ended up exchanging about seven emails with in an attempt to edit my story. From your flamer's review, and due to the lack of specificality about why she would NEVER read it, I think the circumstances are a bit different. Look forward to more chapters- and did mine eyes deceive me, or did I catch a certain story at fanfiction.net?