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something dirty in a cinemaXD i love the idea of guys having sex where they shouldn't.
Brilliant and hot. i love it^^

i liked a lot. i think you should do a follow up. do a vacation one or something.

Argh, coulded find the review till now! Yes, yes write more! I think thier should be more chapters too. It was wow, really good and really hot. Um, you said the other 2 were older, but I thought they we'er all the same age or jack was a lil older. I'm not sure if you'r right thier. Allso you did'nt do any pale skin comments. Well, I figure he's white all over, like alot of cartoons are. Yeah, she's a med student and watch toons, I like that too! I hope you do more on this and I really liked it! Um, can't say I never thought of them like this befor, I have a sick mind, heh

Best lemon I have ever read, PLEASE write more chapters.

Me: Awesome! Hot!

Leo: I wonder who Rai would've chosen if he had to...

Quan: He would've chose Jack! I know Rai. He loves having the power.

Ayame: What makes you think that he wouldn't have chosen Clay? He feels safe with him and he's on the side of good, so there're less issues and naggings.

Rath: Didn't you morons pay attention to the story? He can't chose between them! They're both too good in their own ways! They're either gonna share each other, or Rai's gonna run off to Chase, who's gonna cheat on him with Jack, and then they're gonna have a Three-Way!

Me: Ah, my two favorite Jack slash pairings (Chase, Rai) getting it on together... Now, there's a Three-way I can't wait to read!

Shuyin: ...I'm staying out of this.

Very Very Very nice. hot fic. I love that you're a med student that writes fanfics about cartoon shows. if i didn't know any better, i'd say u were me. lol. so mind if i add u to yahoo messenger?

You know, I wasn't sure I liked this idea, now I've read it, I LOVE it!