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for Unforgivable Love

by Ludra

person Tugera of Deviantart
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, updated!! ^^

Aww, this is soo cute! I love it! <3

Chocolate is gooood.
person Damia
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like this story, however the grammar got worse and worse... I know that English isn't your first language, so would you like a beta? You can contact me via email at Damia_Malfoy@hotmail.com and I could fix some of the grammar probs before emailing it back... you don't have to, just offering

~Damia
person Spirit of Darkness
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! This rocks so far! =P Bring on the next chapter!
person O.o
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somewhere along the live Kimiko got genderbended...hmm, that gives me an idea.
person Yasha-girl
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!I really love this.I can't wait to find out what happens next!
person Crazi-Yami-Neko
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!! **squeals and bounces** I know DC would love it!! ^_^ And I like it too! Your English is really good! I'd say you're doing really well learning. I know native speakers who make mistakes everywhere in their writings so I applaud you much! **does so with a grin** Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
person lilvior
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your idea es muy bien, y i can understand most of the story, but you should consider getting a beta qui hablo Ingles, well done for this though! I could never write a whole fic in another language!
i love jack/rai slash!