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May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG please update! I love this story and I can't wait to read more.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow...*shakes head to dissipate semi-grogginess* I just stayed up the night reading this. And you know what? *Grins maniacally* I am irrefutably glad I did.
This story has…“it“. I do not know what “it” is - neither violence not standoffish characters nor a sequence of events so wickedly awesome that my jaw is quit plaint from that tepid impression of a goldfish I was doing for the past few hours; that, I assure you - but the That-Which-Refuses-To-Be-Named “it” - the essence of what I was looking for in a ZADR story - was there. Perhaps it is the infatuation-borderline-lethal obsession that persists between the Zim and the Dib in your prose that is very reminiscent (albeit of a greater caliber) of the way the two protagonists’ lives seem to revolve around one another in the actual series; or perhaps it is the ingenious, unique dimension you have give to that “thin line between love and hate” that prodigiously illustrates the possibility of someone cruising (and turbulent sailing it was) from a desire to dissect/mutilate/sunder someone to a desire to OWN (on many, many levels) someone. Whatever “it” is, this piece of writing has it down to a T.
Your writing is superb - compact and meaningful. Not a word dares to stray out of the story’s linguistic flow; not a sentence is squandered to aimless wander amongst all the meaningful lines. There is absolutely nothing flowery or posh to be had in the story - which, in my opinion, only enhanced the unfolding literary schema - and the curt, detailed action in the story gives the readers a terrific grasp of the impromptu intent of each character.
I must admit that, when I first ventured into reading your story, I was tersely taken aback by the sheer volume of mirth in the story. It seems as if you have placed all the eerie, bone-chilling, callous aspects of the already-twisted caricature of our world that the original cartoon series is under a magnifying glass and intensified the obscurity and intelligent black humor that characterizes Invader Zim. I find that bizarrely delicious; however, I will be the pettifogger by noting that I sometimes found some of the supporting personages’ actions to be a bit out-of-place…but just a bit.
Overall, your work is fantastic and I pray to all the gods (and demi-gods) that you continue with this story.
P.s. I am just wondering; do you partake to Sci-Fi? You seem to have a very potent pool of technological knowledge to draw from.
This story has…“it“. I do not know what “it” is - neither violence not standoffish characters nor a sequence of events so wickedly awesome that my jaw is quit plaint from that tepid impression of a goldfish I was doing for the past few hours; that, I assure you - but the That-Which-Refuses-To-Be-Named “it” - the essence of what I was looking for in a ZADR story - was there. Perhaps it is the infatuation-borderline-lethal obsession that persists between the Zim and the Dib in your prose that is very reminiscent (albeit of a greater caliber) of the way the two protagonists’ lives seem to revolve around one another in the actual series; or perhaps it is the ingenious, unique dimension you have give to that “thin line between love and hate” that prodigiously illustrates the possibility of someone cruising (and turbulent sailing it was) from a desire to dissect/mutilate/sunder someone to a desire to OWN (on many, many levels) someone. Whatever “it” is, this piece of writing has it down to a T.
Your writing is superb - compact and meaningful. Not a word dares to stray out of the story’s linguistic flow; not a sentence is squandered to aimless wander amongst all the meaningful lines. There is absolutely nothing flowery or posh to be had in the story - which, in my opinion, only enhanced the unfolding literary schema - and the curt, detailed action in the story gives the readers a terrific grasp of the impromptu intent of each character.
I must admit that, when I first ventured into reading your story, I was tersely taken aback by the sheer volume of mirth in the story. It seems as if you have placed all the eerie, bone-chilling, callous aspects of the already-twisted caricature of our world that the original cartoon series is under a magnifying glass and intensified the obscurity and intelligent black humor that characterizes Invader Zim. I find that bizarrely delicious; however, I will be the pettifogger by noting that I sometimes found some of the supporting personages’ actions to be a bit out-of-place…but just a bit.
Overall, your work is fantastic and I pray to all the gods (and demi-gods) that you continue with this story.
P.s. I am just wondering; do you partake to Sci-Fi? You seem to have a very potent pool of technological knowledge to draw from.
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh please update :x i love it. i have a total hard on for extreme love/hate relationships, oh mann
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!! this is great!! i love it!!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....>.> Two weeks and no update. *Sighs* The good ones never get finished TT-TT
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have so much carnage and insanity and logic and twisted logic going around this story and it all makes sense. Dib's crazy, Zim's crazy and its all just some distorted foreplay...*sigh* I love it when a story gets this deep and now I have to wait a few until this story is updated and then I can be happy.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I'm glad I happened to check back. Very nice work - Personally I'm glad you killed off Keef ^__^...I felt like it was a re-enacment of that very old movie where the woman is murdered in the shower and you see her blood (AKA chocolate syrup) Trickling down the drain. ...... Only....with Keef....Which just makes it SO much better. Anyhow - I like how you made Dib into a demented homicidal demon thingie. ( Or even Johnny-esq one might observe?). Anyhow Looking forward to the next chapter.
Blah for how long and good this story is - I'm surprised it dosn't have more readers/reveiwers >F IT SHOULD HAVE MORE READERS DAMMIT.
Blah for how long and good this story is - I'm surprised it dosn't have more readers/reveiwers >F IT SHOULD HAVE MORE READERS DAMMIT.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao! Somehow, I found Keef's murder REALLY freakin' funny! XD I was gonna feel bad about it, but it's just too funny! I'll probably feel bad for him later... BwahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaHAhahahaha!!!! HoohohohahahahahahaMWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! ^_^
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u r determined to put that threesome in my mind aren't you, you bitch.