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I like this fic, please continue

lol well If the cartoon was rated for this amount of sex then It would probaly have this as an episode!

Very nicely done, deliciously dark and seductive. Love Mindy's paranoia, and how Junior would do what it took to get her. I am wondering...would your next fic be Grim/Mandy? You seem to have a knack for making...these type of fics so enjoyable, in such short chapters, that I would love to see what you can do for my favourite pairing (Junior/Mindy now being second in line after Grim/Mandy...)

Anways, once again, well done. Probably one of what I consider the gems of the site. ;) Probably a peridot, to match Junior's eyes.

oooooo i just read the 1st chapter and i am loving this fic already

Yeah. xD I have this this for teenage marriages. That's what I get for watching Riding in Cars With Boys too many times.

Write more Mindy/Jr. is a really good pair. Write more soon.

Hello,
This story was erotic, romantic, and bloody hilarious! =LOL=
Us good girls dont date guys that are too good or too evil. We like guys that are salty and sweet.

oooh, chapter two! well written once again, nice dirty little sex scene, i think i was as disapointed as mindy when he didn't... y'know 'finish her off'. bloody inconsiderate men... cliffhanger ending has me intrigued too! til next time!

i misread the summary, i thought it was mandy and junior, but this is still really good! i love nasty smut like this! i wish there was a billy and many category. well done, i'd like to read more. if it's not too nasty you could try a mandy/grim...? am i too gross? yeah, thought so...