rate_review Reviews

Ok, first of all relax. calm down, i do not leave flames, i only review. it was a good story, and well written, and i love Egon, hes hot! The only word i didn't like in the whole thing, was ure use of genitals...as in she put his hand on her genitals....it strikes me as blech, and not very tasteful. Now, it's not just you, as i feel the same way about anyone who uses it, i just dont like the word. Bold word! Anyway, i enjoyed it and loved a growling, lust-filled Egon...*drools* but your authors note at the end with the caps lock was just plain scary hehe. thanks for sharing anyway

Wolfsoul

This was good. Nice Job! And you can write a review for both of my stories and no flames or critism please.