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for Electric Fire

by Crazi

person kairidell
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it could you please contineu this story it awsome. I hate it when people stop a good story that I like to read. I say this because when I start a story I can't find good I ideas to contineu them. So don't give up so easily on the story you worked on. Oh and start it goss dangit. I want to read the good part!! PLEASE!!!
person Rose
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update! This looks to be a very good and very original story. If u only continue!
person EG
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! This is so hot. I saw this on FF.net and now maybe you can make it better more interesting at least. You have to update this soon!
person Gerble
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Paragraphs could be a bit more spaced out and formatted, but I'm looking forward to more. Especially Richie's reaction.
person Ru-Shin
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...this pairing is a little difficult to find! ^^ This was good, I hope to see more!